still no go im afraid it hangs as soon as it runs afa_os_loader

here is my own s-s
(i've tried with and without my blizkick line same result)
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C:ATA3.driver RESIDENT QUIET
C:stack 8192
; $VER: Startup-Sequence_HardDrive 40.2 (25.2.93)
; Startup-Sequence for hard drive systems
c:LoadModule libs:icon.library libs:workbench.library REVERSE NOREBOOT
BlizKick DEVS:Kick3.9 EXTRESBUF=150000 HOGWAITBLIT SPEEDROM MODULE NoClick Romfixes MoveVBR RebootFix MuMove4k FixMath404 SpeedyIDE BBlank NewAlert RemCards BPPCFix QUIET
C:SetPatch NOROMUPDATE QUIET
CyReq ;one of most important patches in your OS!
C:Patchcontrol
C:Version >NIL:
C:AddBuffers >NIL: DF0: 15
FailAt 21
C:MakeDir RAM:T RAM:Clipboards RAM:ENV RAM:ENV/Sys
;C:Copy >NIL: ENVARC: RAM:ENV ALL NOREQ
L:env-handler ADDVOLNODE
Resident >NIL: C:Assign PURE
Resident >NIL: C:Execute PURE
Assign DH0: WDH0:
Assign DH1: WDH1:
Assign DH2: WDH2:
;Assign >NIL: ENV: RAM:ENV
Assign >NIL: T: RAM:T
Assign >NIL: CLIPS: RAM:Clipboards
Assign >NIL: REXX: S:
Assign >NIL: PRINTERS: DEVS:Printers
Assign >NIL: KEYMAPS: DEVS:Keymaps
Assign >NIL: LOCALE: SYS:Locale
Assign >NIL: LIBS: SYS:Classes ADD
Assign >NIL: HELP: LOCALE:Help DEFER
Assign >NIL: Downloads: WDH2:Downloads
BindDrivers
C:Mount >NIL: DEVS:DOSDrivers/~(#?.info)
C:LoadMonDrvs
SetEnv Language "english"
SetEnv Workbench $Workbench
SetEnv Kickstart $Kickstart
UnSet Workbench
UnSet Kickstart
C:AddDataTypes REFRESH QUIET
;Assign AFA_OS_LIBS: WDH0:Afa_OS_Libs
;C:AFA_OS_loader
C:IconBeFast
Assign THEMES: SYS:Prefs/Presets/Themes
Run > NIL: c:VisualPrefs
C:IPrefs
c:FPPrefs
C:ConClip
Path >NIL: RAM: C: SYS:Utilities SYS:Rexxc SYS:System S: SYS:Prefs SYS:WBStartup SYS:Tools SYS:Tools/Commodities
IF EXISTS S:User-Startup
Execute S:User-Startup
EndIF
Resident Execute REMOVE
Resident Assign REMOVE
Run >NIL: c:Birdie ?
Run >NIL: PowerIcons NOGHOSTSELECT GHOST=50 SELR=80 SELG=80 SELB=80 SCROLLSPEEDUP TEXTMODE=2
C:LoadWB
EndCLI >NIL: