No, it's still correct. Someone can easily read it as if you are stressing first part and second part is an instance (instantiation) of the first.
Dear me, is there no end to your fail?
The example given was of memory, more specifically DRAM:
From a hardware perspective, timing truly matters for the stability of the system. If you do not refresh DRAM at the recommended rate and it will eventually fail to keep its data intact, resulting in software failure (contrast this to static memory, for example). Try running 90ns rated memory at 50ns and see how stable it is over time. Not very, I think you will find.
From a software only perspective, it doesn't matter for the stability whether the DRAM is 100ns or 10ns, only the maximum speed of instruction fetch and data read/write will be affected. Try running Ed from Chip or Fast (hint NoFastMem) and see if it fails on either one after any length of time as a consequence of memory speed.
Only software too large to fit into Chip RAM (or any that requires atomic read/write to an area of memory) will fail to run. Nothing else will be affected from a stability perspective. The only effects you will observe are that running from Chip RAM your regular expression search in a large document might take longer.
So, do you still think that the RAM example is worthy of your "everybody should roll around laughing at you for this, I'm surprised you didn't edit it" remark, or would you prefer to be a man, admit you made a mistake and withdraw it?