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Subject: COMMODORE FREE ISSUE 50
From: nigel parker
Date: Wed, May 11, 2011 7:58 am
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Rather late but it's now finished and available in the usual formats.
http://www.commodorefree.com
Comments / suggestions are most welcome.
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CONTENTS
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* Editorial
* News
- Viva Amiga
- Jim Scabery Commodore Dealer
- ACE 128
- CardSwipe - Original VIC-20 Game
- Snapshoter Updated
- Jose Makes Music with MSSIAH
- CBM PRG Studio Beta Released
- DirMaster v2.2/Style
- CBM-Command V2.0: Updated
- X1000 Nemo Rev. 2 Motherboard
- C64 SID 8580 Basic Sample Pack
- C64 SID Phase Acc And FPGA Tuning
- Arcade Retro Gaming Newsletter
* Interview With Adrian Simpson
* Commodore Amiga Programming
* Sideways SEUCK Compo Entries 2011
* Sudoku Game Review
* On the Road - SC3 Arcade Party 2011
* Back to the Past - Issue 11, Aug 2007
Nigel Parker
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Commodore Free Magazine
http://www.commodorefree.com
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Commodore Computer club U.k.
http://www.commodorecomputerclub.co.uk
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Needs a bit more editing.
First paragraph, first sentence of editorial, "century" is spelled incorrectly as "centaury"
First editorial paragraph uses "to" where "too" should have been used.
Amiga section of editorial, "GTWa (Games That Weren’t Amiga)" is bad. It's "Amiga Games That Weren't" (AGTW)
Title of "READERS COMMENTS" in editorial is missing an apostrophe.
In this section the word "there" is used incorrectly when "their" is the correct word.
EBOOK section of editorial: "feedback" is one word.
This whole paragraph is also a single run-on sentence.
The paragraph following the editorial contains random uppercase letters for no reason.
"I am pretty sure that Every Commodore user is a Doctor who
fan and I for one really enjoyed the Sarah Jane’s adventures;
and so on this assumption it is with sadness that I read about
the following announcement."
As does the cover image description:
"Flag Picture on the Front page Designed by Robert Parker Aged 4"
Excessive use of the semicolon all through the editorial.
Jim Scabery section says:
"If you wish to e-mail Jim, you can contact him at"
Then drops off, no contact method provided until later...
Didn't bother even reading the rest...
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Thanks.
"C64 SID PHASE ACCUMULATOR AND FPGA TUNING"
Over my head but fun to watch.