Update on the CIA problem. I've received the sockets and swapped the CIAs and indeed the problem moves
OK, that explains the confusion then. When you swapped the two 8520s last time, you didn't actually swap them at all, hence the fault remain unchanged.
The RGB test on that monitor looks too dark. I'd suspect it's something to do with the specific video DAC you've sourced. I'm not overly familiar with them as they don't usually give a lot of trouble. But from a quick skim read of the VP101 datasheet, you might be able to fix the brightness issue by changing the scale on the output current. i.e. Modify the value of R217. Perhaps change 470 Ohms to 560 Ohms for a start and see what difference that makes.
Or temporarily replace R217 with a 1k potentiometer. Vary it to see if you can find the optimum value. After you've found that, remove the potentiometer and measure its value. You can use a mixture of two different value resistors in parallel to get close enough to the 'perfect' value you need for R217. If you don't know how to calculate parallel resistances (it's easy enough), there are probably online calculators for this.
I've not spent long looking at it, but see what you make of the VP101 operation:
http://lvd.nedopc.com/Amiga/VideoDACS/vp101.pdfYou'll note that the Vref output (pin 18) is from the internal 1.2V reference, it'll just need the external capacitor connected. If the DC voltage on yours is much different from 1.2V, it might suggest something wrong with the VP101. The A1200 main board has the option to supply Vref externally (R215, D215A), though I expect you won't want those fitted. Maybe there are some variants of VP101 that need Vref supplied externally? I don't know, you'd need to work it out from the datasheet.